Monday, 27 April 2009

Five Popular Science Fiction Ideas

RobotI often search for new friends on social networks, using various keywords related to my interests. That's not a surprise. More of a surprise are the results for 'science fiction'. It brings up many people who aren't interested in science fiction. They've simply mentioned it, usually in the context of "I wish [insert thing] had happened, like science fiction promised!"

So what are the top ideas that everyday non-science fiction people would like to see? From least popular to most...*

  • 5) Food Cubes - The idea of a tasteless cube/pill dealing with your daily food needs is a bit of a niche desire. The food cubes are the wistful want of the very busy person, who can't be bothered to cook dinner that day.

    Cube shaped food seems more popular than pills, sheets, wafers, drinks or other forms of easy-to-eat food. Perhaps food manufacturers should take note, because there aren't that many cube-shaped foods**.
  • 4) Clones - Wouldn't life be so much easier if you had a clone to do the boring bits, like going to work? It doesn't really work like that, but this is the hope of the overworked person. The main flaw in the plan is a clone of you is unlikely to enjoy working anymore than you do.
  • 3) Housework Robots - Most common chores that get "I wish I had a robot" are laundry and hoovering. Things like decorating and gardening get less complaint, though it seems that many gardeners don't like mowing their lawns (we dealt with this at my house by removing most of the grass).
  • 2) Personal Jetpacks - Never worry about parking again! It also means you can cut out the inconvenient walk from the house to the car. The biggest downside is what happens if you forget to buy enough fuel for your trip.
  • 1) Flying Cars - The clear winner is the flying car. It's more popular than the personal jetpack. Probably because most people are a little cautious about the idea of flying that high without a protective covering. And partly because people get very attached to their cars.

The trend is clear... people tend to remember and discuss science fiction ideas that directly relate to their everyday lives. Perhaps I need to start writing more stories about easing the domestic burden (or need to walk), in order to lure in new science fiction fans. Certainly I shall remember the fascination with cubes.


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* No, I didn't do this survey very scientifically. This is the soft science fiction of the survey world.

** You do get those little cubes in Dolly Mixtures though. I like those.

Friday, 24 April 2009

Cultural Appropriation in Fiction: Mutant Message

Cultural appropriation is an issue close to my heart, due to my tendency to write stories set all over the place. I don't intend to hurt people, but good intentions are as common as dandelions. The issue is how to go about writing such a story in an ethical way.

Most discussions talk about this in an abstract way. That wasn't good enough for me. I wanted details, which meant I needed case studies. I found one for 1p on Amazon: "Mutant Message Down Under" by Marlo Morgan. The story is about the time Marlo allegedly spent with Australian Aboriginal people. This book is the poster child for ways to misrepresent another culture.

In this post, I've included some background information about cultural appropriation. Then it's full steam ahead with reviewing the book's content, with a view to the cultural appropriation issues*... I recommend placing any beverages firmly on the mat during that part. Don't say I didn't warn you.


What is Cultural Appropriation?

Cultural appropriation is a common cultural process. Humans see useful or desirable things in other cultures and they make them their own. This has been going on for all recorded history and probably the unrecorded bits too. Some cultures are melting pots of bits and pieces from everywhere.

This is another way of saying, appropriation isn't always bad. It doesn't automatically harm the cultures involved. The trouble tends to come when the appropriation...

  • Silences or replaces the voices of member of that culture.
  • Misrepresents the culture. Coupled with the fact they're silenced, this becomes the mainstream view of that culture.
  • Leads to profit for the appropriator, whilst members of the originating culture get nothing. This one is particularly noticeable when members of the culture live in poverty.

Outside of this, appropriation might make people grumpy, but the long term results aren't the same. If I wrote a story claiming that all Japanese people wear clogs, it's not going to have a long term effect on the culture or economy of Japan. If I wrote the same about Australian Aboriginal people, I'm sure I could get some people believing me.


Mutant Message Synopsis

Marlo Morgan is an American woman. She visits Australia and helps a group of Aboriginal youths (who she refers to as 'half-breeds') set up a business making window screens (an item she says she introduced to Australia). They need her help, because they're inherently lazy. And white Australians are too racist to try and help, believing Aborignal people to be lazy and worthless.

Far across the country, a tribe with no interaction with the modern world hear about her window screens. They're impressed. I'm not sure why, because they don't live in houses and therefore have no windows**. Or how they heard about it in the desert. But anyway, they invite her to visit them.

She accepts the offer, assuming they're going to offer her an award for her window-screening. Instead, they kidnap her and burn all her possessions. They tell her she's going with them on a journey across Australia lasting three months. So off she goes, as a very pale person with no sun protection and little clothing, over the Australian desert. She doesn't collapse from heat exhaustion or sun stroke.

The Real People (as they call themselves) call her 'mutant' and think she must be from outer space. They teach her the power of telepathy and show her special healing powers which heal bones overnight. Oddly, they don't teach her much about real Aboriginal culture... mostly they live with this strange mix of New Age and Native American beliefs***.

During this time, Marlo teaches them some of her own stuff. Like explaining cake. The Real People have an interesting view of cake:

I found their analogy of icing extremely powerful. It seemed to symbolize how much time, in the one-hundred-year Mutant [non-Aborignal] life span, is spent in artificial, superficial, temporary, decorative sweetened pursuits.


After all the walking and New Age philosophy is done, she's cut loose and sent home. She's sent with a message for the world... that the Real People are dying out through choice because the world is such an icky place. They couldn't tell people the message themselves, for reasons which aren't explained, seeing as they have a person who speaks English.


Breaking Down the Issues

Based on my reading of the book, I've highlighted the main problems (in my opinion). They cover most of the things a writer is likely to get wrong, so I think they could be re-used as a 'things not to do' for other work and other cultures.

1) Making People Shells
Marlo's tribe may have called themselves Real People, but they didn't act like them. They didn't have personalities, best friends, lovers... all the things that make a community a community rather than a hive mind. They were empty shells, ready to be filled with whatever the author needed at the time. They spoke with her words.

2) Reinforcing Stereotypes
Many negative stereotypes were reinforced, particularly in relation to the urban Aboriginal people. They were lazy and unable to motivate themselves on their own. They weren't 'proper' Aboriginals in Marlo's eyes.

The Real People were unable to speak for themselves. They needed a white woman to be their spokesperson--another common stereotype used for hunter-gatherer people.

Then there's the positive stereotypes... the idea of the 'noble savage', with advanced healing powers and an inability to lie. Though positive stereotypes can seem less harmful on the surface, they're not. An example is the issue of healthcare. On average, Aboriginal people have poorer health and shorter lifespans than other Australians. They don't have the same access to healthcare. Marlo's stereotype would have you believe there isn't a problem and therefore nothing needs to be done about it.

3) The Author's Worldview as the Culture's Worldview
Marlo's worldview came from a belief in New Age philosophies. So the Aboriginal people in her story believed these things too. She didn't show any Aboriginal beliefs that might conflict with her worldview, such as the traditional gender roles (which would have prevented her from doing a number of things in the book).

It suited Marlo's worldview to have the tribe dying out on purpose (by having no more children) because they're appalled by the state of the world. This isn't the worldview of real Aboriginal people, who aren't trying to wipe themselves out as a political statement. This also leads back to the problem of pretending a problem isn't a problem (i.e., if their numbers decline it's because they want to die out, not because conditions are bad and need improving).

4) Errors in Cultural Depiction
It's unlikely that you could write a book about another culture without making mistakes. But the level of 'mistake' in this book shows a general lack of research. Marlo bolted in lots of Native American culture (such as dream catchers and feathered head-dresses) as well as some New Age ideas (which seem to be the ones she wanted to promote).

5) Culture out of Context
Marlo's book shows ritual dances used as an entertainment for her. This would be like a story where someone wears a wedding dress to go grocery shopping. Just like the wedding dress, you'd expect some sort of explanation for the out-of-context behaviour.

6) Promoting Fiction as Fact
The book was technically a novel, but the introduction clearly states it's only a novel to protect the identity of the Real People. Marlo claimed it was a real experience in later interviews and talks. Despite the falsehood being uncovered (discussed in more detail later), many readers still believe it was true.

Even in a book clearly marked as fiction, there can be issues. If you've written an urban fantasy set in modern-day Australia, readers are likely to assume you've based your Aboriginal characters on their real culture. They're less likely to assume that if it's set in a mystical land far away.

7) Acting as a Spokesperson
Writing a story does not make you the representative of that culture. It doesn't make your voice more important than theirs. Marlo rubbed salt into the wounds by giving talks and setting herself up as a spokesperson. She seemed to be relying on people from the culture being silent and not having a way to complain.

Though most people wouldn't consider doing something that extreme, there is a more common issue in setting yourself up as an expert: defensiveness. It's easy to admit to a mistake when you're a learner. It's not so easy to admit it when you've claimed to be an expert****.

8) Profiting from Appropriation
I've seen it suggested that authors should considering donating money to the cultural inspiration. It's worth considering in this case, the Aboriginal people weren't objecting to missing out on a share of the profit. They were objecting to Marlo profiting from misrepresentation. The principle is the larger issue here (which isn't to say the donating idea is a bad one... it just doesn't make up for misrepresenting a culture).


What Happened Next?

The book made its way to Australia. Then something happened that Marlo probably didn't expect... Aboriginal people read it and started asking questions. Who were the Real People? Why did their culture bear little resemblance to any other group in that area? Details of the book were sent out to Aboriginal groups across Australia, trying to find out the truth. None of them had heard of Marlo.

Marlo eventually admitted that she'd made it up and apologised to a group of Aboriginal Elders. The full story is detailed in a report by Dumbartung (a group responsible for promoting Aboriginal art and protecting the rights of Aboriginal artists). However, she continued to tour and released a second book, so the apology didn't really mean anything.


Conclusions

In a world where Aboriginal people were writing in every genre, Mutant Message would be irrelevant. It wouldn't have any real impact and most people would realise it was made up. But we're not living in that world, and that's why the appropriation hurt. For many readers, this book was their first introduction to Aboriginal culture... and it wasn't a good one.

It didn't help that the apology got less publicity than the book, allowing Marlo to continue with her lectures and publish a sequel. This example highlights why cultural appropriation is such a sensitive issue. Marlo's inaccurate version of Aboriginal culture is better known than the real thing. In the end, she isn't the one who has to worry about the fall-out from the misinformation. That falls squarely on the Australian Aboriginal people... it's perhaps not a surprise that they're not keen on people writing about their culture. There are too many Marlo Morgans and not enough positive examples.




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* I'm not an expert on Australian Aboriginal culture or issues of cultural appropriation (though I know enough that the problems with the book were like big flashing lights with bells on them). I've cross-checked facts with Aboriginal sources as much as possible, but there may be gaps. Please let me know if I've made a mistake.

** Not necessarily true of modern day Aboriginal people, but the fictional group in the book didn't live in houses.

*** Though this discussion deals mainly with the Australian Aboriginal people, it's worth noting that there are other racial misrepresentations in the book. 1) Appropriating Native American culture and reusing it as alleged Aboriginal practises. 2) Depicting all white Australians as being deeply racist. Racists exist everywhere, but so do people working against racism. I assume she did this so that she would appear to be awesomely un-racist. 3) I didn't notice Australians of other races, which struck me as odd.

**** This was noticeable in the recent racefail discussions, about racism and cultural appropriation in speculative fiction. Some of the arguments were caused by people becoming extremely defensive when they made mistakes, rather than saying "yeah, I'm a beginner at this... and I messed up."

Tuesday, 14 April 2009

Being an Agent for a Day

Nathan Bransford currently has an agent for a day contest going on. Fifty queries have been posted and each pretend agent gets to accept and reject them.

Some ponderings I have so far...

  • It's amazing how many people don't want to tell the agent their story. I think some fell into the trap of trying to be mysterious, but when everyone has a secret power or thing he could never have expected, it does get old.
  • I noted many of the form rejection letters used agent classics like "I just didn't connect with the writing" and "this is a subjective business". Because half the fun of being an agent is poking subtle fun at real agents.
  • I hope no one takes my form rejection too seriously. I have used a much shorter one for most rejections, because I was concerned readers would get bored of the same form rejections over and over. Now that's an issue agents don't usually have...

All round, it's educational. Even if you don't want to take part, it's worth reading the queries. I'll update this post at the end to link to the manuscripts I requested.


My Requests

#10 Thriller; #17 Supernatural Thriller; #20 Literary Memoir (Trucking); #38 Dystopian Young Adult; #40 Literary 'Book Club Fiction'

The books aren't necessarily things I'd read. If I were an agent, I'd be more fussy about that... but we're aiming to hit the published ones after all. Mainly, I found I went for those with a clear story and interesting voice. A lot of good premises went by the wayside for having confusing plot descriptions.

I only had to reject one for not following submission guidelines, which I'm sure is better than most agents really get.

In conclusion, I can say that my hatred of word verification has reached an all-time high. I'm glad I don't have to do one of those everytime I send out an email. Those things are designed to trip up dyslexic people... all those closely linked nm and bd. Someone evil designed those, with perfect letter recognition skills. I had to take breaks from the queries purely due to word verification. So even if you thought my comments on your query make me an evil meanie... realise I went through hardship to send you that letter.


My Form Rejection

If you got any variety of this, I form rejected you... nothing personal.

Dear Author,

Thank you for your submission. I regret to inform you that due to the state of the industry, the poor economy, the subjective nature of books and the state of the sunspot cycle, I'm going to have to pass.

Other agents might feel differently, so please don't cry! Good luck with your future submissions.

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Polenth

Saturday, 11 April 2009

Short Storyist Diary: On Poems

Floral BookPoems were among the first things I wrote. I was the child who wrote non-rhyming freeform verse whilst my peers thought poems had to rhyme. It meant they didn't like my poems, but at least I can say I never had a poem about a fireworks display descend into frogs in Spain going out in the rain because they quite liked pain again*.

I didn't take the idea of getting poems published seriously, as I realised it was a hard sell. I could see that shops sold few poetry books.

Now, things have changed somewhat. I have a list of publications taking poetry and I'm not afraid to use it. This month has seen more poetry submissions than prose. I've no idea if it's good enough to be published, but there's only one way to find out**.

My main sadness is the lack of markets for light-hearted and nonsense verse***. It's hard enough to find places accepting rhymes (despite my comments on freeform verse, I don't write all my poems in the same style). The answer is probably to become famous. Then, my nonsense verse will be seen as secretly deep rather than silly. Though really, I write it because I think the world needs more poems about molluscs.


A Few Starting Links...

Speculative poetry markets:
Goblin Fruit
Star*Line

Speculative markets with some poetry:
Strange Horizons
Abyss and Apex
Ideomancer
Lone Star Stories

Other Poetry:
Every Day Poets


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* Yes, this happened.

** Leaving offerings for the rhyme goblins.

*** There are some, including a few of those I've listed in the links. I just wish there were more open to such things.

Tuesday, 7 April 2009

The Books Are Plotting

It started when I brought Fahrenheit 451. I'd only read a few of Ray Bradbury's shorts up till then and I'd never owned any of his books. It was too early to see the trend.

Next, I was given a copy of The Martian Chronicles. I noticed "Hey, it has the same sort of cover as the last one... it must be a set." I thought nothing more of it.

And then, I'm given another one (Something Wicked This Way Comes). This time second hand. It could have been a copy of any of the editions ever published... but no. It was from the same set.

There's something creepy about this set. Why do they keep finding me? Why not one of the other editions of his books? Do they know something I don't? Are they sneaking around at night?

I'm keeping my eye on them. That's all I'm saying.

Saturday, 4 April 2009

The Comment Policy of Toadstool Terror

The time comes in every blog's life when it needs a comment policy. Mine is a simple policy with a love of cupcakes. It may be updated from time to time in response to feedback.



THE BASIC MUSHROOM

Think of my blog as my home. If you wouldn't say it sitting on my sofa, drinking a hot beverage of your choice, don't say it on my blog.



THE SPOTS ON THE CAP

A few examples of things my sofa doesn't like...

  • Obscenities.*
  • Personal attacks. There are some grey areas here, particularly during debates. You might have a valid criticism of someone else's behaviour. For example, you might want to say someone is behaving in an anti-fungus way. In those cases, I'll judge it by approach. Bad: "OMG ur a fungist pig!!!"; Good: "It's fungist to say that mushrooms and toadstools look alike".
  • Bigotry. If you make a bigoted comment, there's a high probability it won't get through. I may make exceptions for someone who seems clueless but open to discussion, but there aren't any guarantees.
  • Spamming.
  • Adult rated stuff.
  • Posting your personal details. Includes home address and phone number.
  • Posting someone else's personal details. Includes their real name if it is not commonly known.
  • Comments completely unrelated to the blog post.

Something my sofa doesn't mind, but I do...

  • Comments containing videos / Links to videos. Occasionally, I check a video and approve it. Most of the time, I have no way to hear sound on the computer. The video languishes in the approval list for several eons, while I think "where are my headphones?". Then, once it's gone all moldy and even the person who posted it has long forgotten, I find it again and delete the thing before it develops sentience and takes over the world. You increase your chances of me watching the video if you give it a text description**.


A FEW SPORES LATER

I can be contacted at polly@polenthblake.com if you feel I unfairly deleted your fungist comment, let though a comment that was actually an insult aimed at you, didn't notice when someone posted your address in the form of a riddle... or anything else of that nature. I'm sure I'll miss things at times.

My sofa isn't available for comment.



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* Pirates are allowed to call people 'scurvy sea dog' and related insults, because I like pirates.

** Good Video Descriptions: This is me pulling a dragon out of a hat; this is me altering the fabric of the universe; this video has cute bunnies twitching their noses. Bad Video Descriptions: Here's a random video I found; Watch this; Go find some speakers***.

*** For obvious reasons, I'm also not inclined to listen to podcasts and webradio interviews. It isn't you. It's me.

Wednesday, 1 April 2009

Did You Eat My Story?

It's now officially April Fools in England, even if it isn't everywhere else. As I'm not a fan of practical jokes, it tends to be a day of icky badness for me. So in the theme of ickiness, I thought I'd blog about the thing I hate the most as a writer: query letters.

No, not the one you send with your novel idea. I'm talking about short story queries... they haven't responded to your story within their deadline and you don't know why. So you're supposed to send a letter asking about it.

I think the dislike comes from the fact you have to ask them what's up without sounding like you're a) accusing* or b) impatient**. Whilst attempting to soften these snarky-edged swords, it's easy to go over-the-top in the other direction***. Restraining orders put a bit of a damper on your budding short story career.

But you also don't want to sound like you don't care. This is particularly problematic if you've delayed sending the message as long as possible in the hopes of a reply. The temptation to explain the delay is strong, especially if you have a real reason. The trouble with the truth is it tends to be complicated and make no sense to anyone who wasn't there****.

I avoid all this by keeping my queries short and sticking to the facts (when I sent the original story*****, what it was called and who is this Polenth person anyway). Which might sound terse and grumpy. There's no winning.

Give me rejections anyday******.


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* "I noticed you couldn't be bothered to reply to my submission."

** "It's been two minutes since your thirty day response deadline. I've been clicking 'refresh' on my email every five minutes since I sent that story. For thirty days! My finger hurts. I need a hug."

*** "I've so wanted to be published by your magazine forever and when you didn't reply I was so worried! I read all the blogs of your editors and have maps to all your houses from Google maps! Isn't Google maps cool? But anyway, I'm just writing to see where my story is. You didn't reject me, did you?"

**** "I would have queried sooner, but my computer was damaged after my pond broke and I had to spend all my spare money rehousing the tadpoles, but then my sister came home and I borrowed the one down at the library. But the frogs are fine now."

***** The first time I had to send a query, I considered telling them exactly how many days it had been since the deadline, just in case they thought I was being hasty. It was around three months over the reply deadline. Yes, I was that paranoid.

****** Despite my concerns about writing the perfect letter, I haven't had any editors decide I'm crazy yet. Or they've not admitted it in their replies. The current score for replies was: one rejection went missing on the interwebs, one magazine hadn't gotten a round tuit and one had never heard of me. I had a quiet sniffle at the last one.