If you watched the Peter Jackson version of King Kong, you'll know this scene. The girl, King Kong and a t-rex are falling. They're caught in vines and they're swinging back and forth. Any minute, the vines will snap and send them tumbling to the ground. The t-rex, as well as falling, is under attack from King Kong. What is on the t-rex's mind? The danger from falling and the giant gorilla would be a good guess. Wrong. All the t-rex wants is to eat the bite-sized girl.
You can laugh at the film all you want, but books do this too. It's especially common in fantasy books. The predator will stop at nothing to kill the heroes, for no apparent reason.
Predators will attack people, but there are things to consider. Many predators are frightened of humans (elves, dwarves, insert sentient race here). This was demonstrated by Nigel Marven, a naturalist, who jumped in the middle of a pride of wild lions (don't try this at home). The lions scattered. People are scary, because predators don't want to get hurt. Injury means death for many wild animals. Even when a predator could subdue a human, there are many easier snacks to hunt.
So why would a predator attack a party of fantasy adventurers?
- Food Scraps: The biggest problem with wolves is not attacking people. They're timid. It's stealing food. They'll follow and wait for a moment of weakness when food is left unattended. This sort of attack isn't immediately dangerous, but could lead to starvation later on. What will the party do when they don't have enough food for everyone?
- Surprise: There are times when sneaking around is a bad idea. Though most predators avoid people, they may not hear them coming. A cornered animal will attack. It will also escape as soon as it can, so the party could diffuse the situation by backing off.
- Unfamiliarity: If a predator doesn't know what a human is, it might try to attack. This is not going to be a continuous attack till death. It's testing the waters. A suitable show of resistance could drive it away. Dominant behaviour, like staring at it or shouting, might cause it to run before it attacks.
- Familiarity: Feral dogs are far more dangerous than wolves. They're so used to humans, they don't see them as a threat. Familiarity could also mean the animal is used to eating humans. Crocodiles are more likely to attack in regions where they've been fed dead bodies. They learn to associate the smell and taste with food. A live human is more dangerous, but crocodiles are not the sharpest tools in the shed.
- Individual Difference: A larger predator might have some early success with attacking humans. That individual could start to seek out humans as prey, despite the fact its species normally wouldn't. Man-eating tigers are a good example. Tigers don't usually eat people, but a few get a taste for it. Due to their strength, they have a good chance of over-powering a lone human. They may manage to pick off a sizable number of people before they're hunted down. Being hunted down is inevitable, and will put a stop to this behaviour becoming more common in the tiger population.
Many dragon stories follow this sort of pattern. It isn't a colony of dragons terrorising the village. It's an individual dragon.
This will affect your world-building. If a man-eater is on the loose, the local villagers would be talking about it. Perhaps the adventurers have been hired to deal with it. It would be odd for a man-eater to pop up out of the blue, with no one else knowing about it. - Great Size: If your predator is the size of the average cathedral, a few humans aren't a big deal. It won't get hurt. Though would they be worth eating, based on size? It might be like a whale sucking up krill. It could hoover up whole villages.
- Weakened Prey: An injured and helpless human is a quick snack. Much easier to pick off the injured straggler. Predators will still be cautious, because a weakened human could cause injuries. They're likely to launch small attacks, testing the prey's strength.
- Death and Disease: An injured or diseased animal may not act rationally. Rabies causes violent behaviour in many mammals. This has implications if a character is bitten during an attack. They might die from infection some months later, despite surviving the initial attack. This is one of the few times an animal will attack when it's a stupid idea and keep going despite injuries.
- Intelligence: An intelligent predator might have other reasons to attack. Perhaps someone is paying it. Insert all your usual sentient motivations here. If your predator is awesomely intelligent, don't make it stupid. It would use tactics and cunning, not just blindly blunder into the party and hope for the best (unless it's really optimistic or suicidal).
The golden rule: For healthy animals, the reward should outweigh the risk. They're not going to stick around after someone smites one of the pack with a fireball. Animals with problems (sick, injured or insane) might keep attacking despite the odds, but it's going to seem odd if this keeps happening (unless your main character is a insane animal magnet, due to an ancient curse).


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This feels just like an entry out of The Tough Guide to Fantasyland: The Essential Guide to Fantasy Travel by Diana Wynne Jones. Have you ever read it? It is THE bible for fantasy writers (though she never intended it that way. It was supposed to be a companion to her novel The Dark Lord of Derkholm, which is absolutely hilarious and I highly recommend). She talks all about the pitfalls the tourists (readers) will fall into during their tour (quest) because the great almighty Management (the author) just wants it that way. It is in encyclopedic form (is that even a word?) and is absolutely, irrevocably hilarious. The entry on HORSES, and STEW are particular favorites of mine (though the one on "pay close attention to legends because they are never wrong and are often far more accurate than history, which most natives seem to know little about" hits a striking chord). Thanks for posting this up, it is quite a refreshing reminder of the clichés we fantasy writers tend to fall into, when what we really need is to think outside of the box and create something real. Now I'm off to pull out my dusty copy. It's been a while since I've read that little treasure.
I don't tend to be much of one for companion books or books on writing. As in, I've not read one to my knowledge. Though I like her stories.
I can imagine what she might have to say about stew and horses... the five minute stew and horses that keep going forever are a humorous stable of the fantasy genre.
Oh I would highly recommend it. It does not feel attached to the book at all (I actually found out YEARS later that it was at all connected to Derkholm. There was no reference to it anywhere). And that is exactly what she said, although she did make the comment that horses in Fantasyland probably breed by pollunation, because there seems to be no time ever that a horse goes into heat and there are very few geldings around. You should write more of these. We fantasy authors need these kinds of little reminders every once in a while. :)
This is a GREAT post. I think you just solved a problem for me with my fantasy novel. I wanted a monster to attack my main character, but it was feeling a little Godzilla.
Now if I use a confident pack of predators, it ups the danger and will feel more realistic.
Thanks so much!
Melody Platz
www.writerscomfycorner.com
There's a thought for another time... predator tactics. But I probably ought to do something that doesn't involve people being eaten next. Or people'll start to worry about me.
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